Movie presentation

Student marketing

• A lot of feedback we received was the movie title was catchy and easy to remember.  However, the title would be even better if it was slightly shorter.

• The cast seemed appropriate but could include more teenagers.

• Film sounds like it would only appeal to younger children and will unlikely attract teenagers or adults

• The plot is interesting but could be too complicated for younger children to follow, however it is different.
• Marketing is good for example not using social media is a good idea as our young audience will not see it.

Teacher marking

Title is good and clear, however cast is not well known and do no need all of them and needed more description on some of them. Enigma code was intriguing but still not sure about it
Well throughout however needed more original idea.
The narrative fits genre but would like to hear more and marketing interesting but no well enough developed.

In my opinion, I think that the film idea is original and I would pay to watch it.  But, it does not include very much enigma and because almost all of the cast are young children I'm not sure older generations will be able to relate and that is a problem as it is supposed to have a universal audience.